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Checked at band 6.5 · 170 wordsI'd like to talk about my younger cousin, Lin. She works in an office and used to sit for most of the day. Last year she often felt tired and complained that her back felt stiff, so I thought she needed to move more.
I helped her because we were already close, and I was worried that her routine was not healthy. I also wanted someone to exercise with, because I found it hard to keep doing it alone.
At first, we went for a brisk walk around a park near our homes for about half an hour, three evenings a week. When it rained, we followed simple exercise videos at home. I reminded her to drink water and take short walking breaks at work. After a few months, she had more energy and said her back was better.
It wasn't completely easy because she was busy and sometimes wanted to skip a session. I had to encourage her, but it became easier once walking was part of our routine.
- Specific problem · “she often felt tired”
- Action example · “we went for a brisk walk”