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Checked at band 6.5 · 175 wordsI’d like to talk about my parents’ thirtieth wedding anniversary party. It was a special event for our family, and we wanted to celebrate their long life together.
The party was held last autumn in a private room at a restaurant near our home. We had it on a Saturday evening, so most people could come after work. Around twenty people were there, including my parents, my brother and his family, and some close friends of my parents.
We had a big dinner with several dishes, and my uncle gave a short speech about how my parents first met. After that, my brother showed some old family photos on a screen. Everyone laughed when they saw pictures of my parents when they were young. We also had a cake, and my parents cut it together.
The party impressed me because it felt warm and personal. It wasn’t a very expensive event, but everyone helped to make it special. I was happy to see my parents enjoying time with the people who are important to them.
- Simple contrast · “It wasn’t a very expensive event”
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