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Checked at band 6 · 158 wordsThe person I admire is my aunt, who is about twenty years older than me. She is my father's older sister, and I have known her since I was a child. When I was young, I often stayed at her home during school holidays, so I got to know her well.
She is a quiet and patient person. She doesn't talk a lot, but she listens carefully and gives practical advice. She has a small clothing shop near her home, and she has worked there for many years. She is also good at managing money, so she never wastes it.
One thing she did was help my cousin pay for college when his family had money problems. She worked extra hours and saved part of her income for him. She also helped my grandparents with daily things when they became older.
I admire her because she is responsible and kind, and she helps others without expecting anything back.
- Specific character detail · “gives practical advice”
- Specific example · “saved part of her income”