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Checked at band 6.5 · 173 wordsI'd like to talk about my cousin Ming, who is a few years older than me. We grew up in the same neighbourhood, and now we meet for dinner about once a month. He used to work long hours in an office and didn't exercise much.
Last year, he decided to improve his health. He started walking and jogging in a park near his home three evenings a week. He also stopped buying sweet drinks every day and began taking lunch from home. At first, he found it difficult because he was tired after work, but he kept doing it.
He made these changes because he had gained weight and often felt tired. A health check also showed that he needed to pay more attention to his health. I think he has been quite successful. After about six months, he had lost some weight, and he told me he could sleep better and had more energy. He still follows this routine now, so the changes seem to have become part of his life.
- Showing persistence · “he kept doing it”