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Checked at band 6.5 · 167 wordsI’d like to talk about a woman I met at a community cooking class near my home. Her name was Lin, and she was one of the other students. I met her about three weeks ago, on a Saturday morning. We were put in the same group, so we spent around an hour preparing dumplings together.
I want to know more about her because she seemed very interesting. She told me she had moved to the city recently for work, but she didn’t say much about her job. She also knew a lot about different kinds of food, and she gave me a few helpful tips while we were cooking. I wanted to ask her more, but the class ended and she had to leave quickly.
I only met her once, but she was friendly and easy to talk to. I felt comfortable with her, and I was curious about her life. I hope I can meet her again at another class and have a longer conversation.
- State interest directly · “she seemed very interesting”
- Add a specific detail · “a few helpful tips”