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Checked at band 6.5 · 151 wordsI'd like to talk about the Yangtze River, which is in China. It starts in the west of the country and flows east across many provinces before reaching the sea near Shanghai. It is about 6,300 kilometres long, so it is the longest river in China. It is also quite wide in many places, especially near the lower part.
The river looks different along its route. In some areas, there are high mountains and green hills around it, while in the cities you can see bridges, boats and buildings beside the water. The water is sometimes brown, especially after rain, but the view can still be very beautiful.
I think it is important because it provides water for people and farms, and many boats use it to carry goods. It has also helped cities grow along its banks. For me, it is an important part of China’s geography and daily life.
- Explain its importance · “it provides water for people and farms”
- Describe the scenery · “the view can still be very beautiful”