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托福访谈题:大学生预算管理

从一次为想要的东西存钱的经历,问到大学迎新该不该开预算课。 每题两篇范文,约 4 分和约 5.5 分,写清楚第二篇为什么分高。

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选一道题,听完题目在 45 秒内作答。答完再对照范文,比先读范文更容易看出差在哪。

选一道题

Could you describe a time when you saved for something you wanted and explain what helped or made the process difficult?

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先听一遍题目。

第 1 题 · 你的经历

Could you describe a time when you saved for something you wanted and explain what helped or made the process difficult?

约 4 分

80 词

I saved for a second-hand bicycle last semester. I wanted one because my classes were in buildings far apart. I wrote down my usual spending and noticed that I bought a drink after almost every afternoon class. I started bringing water three days a week and put the money aside. It took about two months to reach my goal. I still bought a drink sometimes, so the plan did not feel too strict. Seeing the amount grow helped me continue.

  • put the money aside · 用 put aside 说先把钱存起来
  • did not feel too strict · 说预算没有太苛刻,解释自己为什么能坚持

约 5.5 分

103 词

I saved for a second-hand bicycle because walking between distant campus buildings was taking up a surprising amount of my day. I began by looking at a week of ordinary spending rather than deciding to stop buying everything enjoyable. Drinks after class were the easiest place to make a change. I brought water on several days and moved the difference into a separate balance on my phone. After about two months, I bought a bike from a graduating student. The process taught me that a small rule I can repeat works better for me than an ambitious restriction I abandon after a week.

  • rather than deciding to stop buying everything enjoyable · 对比彻底不花钱的做法,说明节省也能留点乐趣
  • a small rule I can repeat · 说规则小而能重复做,解释预算怎样容易坚持
5.5 分比 4 分好在哪
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4 分那篇讲完做法,最后说看着钱变多有动力。5.5 分那篇从这件事总结出经验:能一直做到的小规则,比坚持不了一周的严格限制更管用。
用词
4 分那篇说法常见,如把钱存起来。5.5 分那篇写清是把省下的差额转进手机里单独的余额,用词更准。
第 2 题 · 你的选择

When managing your spending, would you rather record every purchase or set a weekly limit and check only the total?

约 4 分

82 词

I would rather set a weekly limit. I tried recording every purchase in an app, but I often forgot small things and then stopped using it. A weekly total is easier for me to follow. I check my balance on Sunday and decide how much I can spend on meals and activities. If I spend more early in the week, I choose cheaper plans later. This method is not very detailed, but I can keep doing it without feeling tired of it.

  • set a weekly limit · 说每周设个上限,给出管理预算的办法
  • If I spend more early in the week · 用 if 说周初花多了,后面就要调整

约 5.5 分

102 词

I'd choose a weekly limit, with a closer look only when the numbers surprise me. I once abandoned a spending app because entering tiny purchases started to feel like homework. Now I separate essential costs, give myself a weekly amount for flexible spending, and check it on Sunday. If I've used much more than expected, I look back through the payments to find out why. That gives me enough information to change a habit without turning every snack into a bookkeeping task. A detailed record might suit someone else, but I need a system that stays useful when the semester gets busy.

  • when the numbers surprise me · 说花费出乎预料才细查,办法不会太费事
  • flexible spending · 用 flexible 区分能少花的钱和必需开销
5.5 分比 4 分好在哪
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4 分那篇的办法是超了就后面省一点。5.5 分那篇先把必需开销分出去,数字异常时再翻账单找原因,等于两种方法各取一部分。
用词
4 分那篇说记账时常忘、后来就不用了。5.5 分那篇用 “feel like homework” 这个比方说明逐笔记账的烦。
第 3 题 · 你的看法

Some students say small daily purchases are too minor to matter when planning a budget. How far do you agree with that statement?

约 4 分

82 词

I disagree because small costs can become a large amount when they happen often. I used to buy a drink every afternoon without thinking about it. Each drink was cheap, but the weekly total was similar to the cost of several lunches. I do not think people need to avoid every small pleasure. It is more useful to notice which purchases are automatic and which ones we really enjoy. Then we can choose what to keep instead of feeling guilty about everything.

  • when they happen often · 说次数多了就会积累,解释小钱为何值得留意
  • which ones we really enjoy · 问哪些花费真让自己开心,帮助选择要省哪笔

约 5.5 分

95 词

They can matter quite a lot, especially when they become automatic. I used to buy drinks after most lectures. I barely noticed each payment, but adding them up showed that they took a noticeable share of my weekly spending. That didn't mean I needed to give up all treats. It helped me distinguish a coffee I enjoyed with a friend from a drink I bought without really wanting it. Budgeting helps me make choices, rather than simply restrict spending. Small purchases deserve attention because of their pattern, not because every inexpensive pleasure is a mistake.

  • adding them up · 用 adding up 说把小额花费加起来看
  • distinguish a coffee I enjoyed with a friend from a drink · 比较和朋友喝咖啡与随手买饮料,说明钱该怎么省
5.5 分比 4 分好在哪
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4 分那篇只说要分清习惯消费和真心喜欢的。5.5 分那篇举出两杯具体的饮料:和朋友一起喝的咖啡,和顺手买却不想喝的饮料。
衔接
4 分那篇算完总账,直接跳到不必戒掉所有小享受。5.5 分那篇用 “That didn't mean” 承接上一句的发现。
第 4 题 · 更大的议题

Should universities include practical budgeting sessions in their orientation programme, even though students arrive with very different financial circumstances?

约 4 分

81 词

I think a short session would help, if it avoids assuming everyone has the same income. Many new students are managing rent, food, and transport for the first time. I would have liked a simple example showing how to spread money across a month. The session should also explain where students can ask for support when money is not enough. It should not suggest that every problem comes from careless spending. Different examples would make the advice useful for more people.

  • for the first time · 说新生是第一次自己管钱,支持他们的理由更清楚
  • avoids assuming everyone has the same income · 提醒每个人收入不同,预算课不能按同一情况教

约 5.5 分

95 词

I'd include an optional practical session, with examples that reflect different circumstances. When I arrived at university, I understood individual prices but hadn't thought much about irregular costs, such as replacing a broken device or traveling home. A simple exercise on planning a month would have helped. However, the message shouldn't be that financial difficulty can always be solved by skipping coffee. I'd also keep personal figures private during the session. The goal would be to give students useful tools and places to ask for help, without judging circumstances they may have little control over.

  • irregular costs · 点出不定期支出,提醒预算别漏算这些钱
  • keep personal figures private · 说个人收支不用公开,课堂安排照顾了隐私
5.5 分比 4 分好在哪
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4 分那篇说新生第一次管房租、吃饭和交通。5.5 分那篇说出自己入学时具体缺什么:没想过换坏掉的设备、回家路费这类不固定开销。
衔接
4 分那篇用几句 “should” 把要求一条条列出。5.5 分那篇先讲课程的用处,再用 “However,” 转到课程解决不了的情况。
用词
4 分那篇说问题不都来自乱花钱。5.5 分那篇用 “skipping coffee” 这个具体说法来反驳这种想法。

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